Surprised!
By newatit33.
A funny thing happened last weekend that still has me shaking my head. It all happened at the annual boat races held in the main harbor of our city. My wife and I attend the races every year and enjoy the competition. This year it was unusually hot, and most people in the crowd were dressed for it or, should I say, undressed for it.
I noticed a woman about our age walking towards us. She was very attractive and had long, flowing hair that blew the wind in her face. She came right up to us and sat down beside my wife. As she did, her legs opened and revealed she was not wearing panties. Her cunt was open to the world, and she knew it as she looked directly at me, a slight smile on her face.
She moved closer to my wife, almost touching her. She leaned back and raised her knees to rest on them, exposing her bare cunt to all. I noticed it was shaved, and her opening was wet. Her lips opened a little so I could see the pink of her insides as she moved.
My wife finally acknowledged her with a smile, but it wasn’t long after that that the two of them chatted like they were old friends. My wife is a bit of a prude regarding sex and has often said that women didn’t interest her. Anyway, here she was, talking up a storm with a half-naked woman on the beach on a hot day.
After watching a few races that my mind wasn’t on, I noticed that the woman’s skirt had ridden up her thighs, exposing more of her bare cunt. I also noticed my very relaxed wife moved closer to the woman, and their thighs and legs were touching. My wife’s hand was resting on the woman’s knee as they continued talking while I watched the two of them.
I wasn’t listening to them, but I was enjoying what I was seeing, and the more they talked, the closer they got to each other. I saw my wife’s hand slide down the woman’s thigh a little until it rested at her hemline. The woman had opened her legs a little more and rested on her hands as she leaned back. The gentle breeze blew her skirt up occasionally, exposing her whole cunt, which I was sure my wife had noticed.
They continued until, after the fourth race, my wife turned to me and said that she was going to the restroom. She asked the woman if she would come with her, and she agreed, nodding. As the woman got up, she spread her legs wide apart, and I could see her whole cunt and ass, making my cock twitch once or twice. I watched the two women walk away, their shoulders rubbing each other, as they held hands so they wouldn’t get separated in the big crowd.
I waited until they were just about out of sight, then got up to follow them. I stayed behind just enough that if they looked back, they wouldn’t see me in the crowd. I watched as they seemed completely immersed in each other, still holding hands and laughing as they walked into the restroom. I stopped and watched the restroom door, waiting to see when they would come out so I could move to where they wouldn’t see me. As I stood there, a couple of women came out of the restroom, and I could hear them talking as they walked past me.
“Did you see that?” one woman asked the other.
“No, I didn’t,” replied the other.
“You didn’t see those two women feeling each other in there?”
“No.”
“Well, you sure missed a show. They were kissing and rubbing each other breasts. One woman had her skirt up around her waist while the other one had her finger buried inside her cunt. You didn’t hear her moaning as she was getting finger fucked?”
“No, I didn’t hear anything, but you know what, I’m going back in there, and I hope I see what you did.”
“I’m coming with you,” replied the other woman.
I watched the two of them disappear back into the restroom. Others were coming and going, but my wife and her new friend had yet to come out. The flow of women slowed, and finally, the two women I had overheard before emerged again. This time they were quite red-faced and seemed a little dazed.
“Wow,” one of them said. “I see what you mean. They might as well have taken their clothes right off. I liked the one’s big tits.”
“I like the other’s cunt. It was so juicy and wet, and I could hear it squish as she was getting finger fucked.”
‘Wow,’ I thought. ‘Whom were they talking about? Surely it wouldn’t have been my wife and the woman, or was it?’ Nothing I could do about it was wait until they returned from the restroom to see what was going on.
Finally, after about twenty minutes, the two of them emerged. Their clothes were messy, and their faces were red and puffy. Their lips were red and swollen as they walked away from the restroom. I watched them until they got too close, then hurried back to where we had been sitting. The two of them finally reached me, and they both smiled.
“Honey, this is Jan,” my wife said. “Jan has invited me to her place just around the corner to see her garden. She will drive me home later. You don’t mind, do you?”
“No, I don’t mind,” I replied. “Have a good time.”
I watched them disappear into the crowd and followed them. They walked across the street and around the corner with me close behind but careful not to let them see me. I walked past the house and noticed the back of the house had a large fence around it with bushes growing all over it, making the backyard a place where no one could see into it.
I continued around the block and came up the alley. I found the backyard and looked around for something to stand on when I heard a loud moan inside the yard. As I stood there, I heard over and over again moan after moan. I knew now what was happening. The two women the other women had been talking about were my wife and Jan.
I finally found a small opening in the bushes to see into the backyard. I was amazed at what I saw when I finally found the two figures on the lawn. My wife and Jan were completely naked, lying on a towel in the middle of the yard. Their mouths were glued to each other as their tongues explored the insides of each other. Their hands were roaming all over each other’s body, fingers pinching nipples and dipping between spread thighs. Their moans were getting louder and louder the longer they kissed and caressed each other.
Suddenly, Jan spun around on top of my wife and offered her soaking cunt to my wife, who didn’t hesitate in thrusting her tongue deep into Jan’s cunt. Jan moaned and moved her head down between my wife’s open thighs. I heard a muffled moan from my wife as the two women licked and sucked and fucked each other with their tongues.
I watched them until they separated after each had a giant orgasm. Jan then stood up and put on a huge dildo. My wife watched her put the apparatus on and held her arms open, inviting Jan to come down to her again. When Jan did, I saw the dildo slide into my wife’s wide-open cunt easily. They stayed still for a minute then Jan started to fuck my wife.
Their lips were locked together again as Jan pounded at my wife’s cunt. My wife initially spread her legs, but she soon moved so they were over Jan’s shoulders, giving Jan more access to her open cunt. That’s when Jan started to thrust up into my wife. With each thrust, I could hear their stomachs and thighs slap against one another while they moaned and groaned. My cock was harder than it had ever been, I’m sure, as I continued to watch these two women fuck in the backyard of Jan’s house.
After my wife had another huge orgasm, the two women switched positions, and now it was my wife who was fucking Jan with long, hard thrusts. God, what a sight. Here was my prudish wife fucking and getting fucked by another woman and enjoying it. I couldn’t help but remember when we discussed woman-to-woman sex and how my wife reacted. Now, here she was, going completely against what she had said. My wife was fucking a woman with a huge dildo tied around her waist and sticking her tongue deep down the woman’s throat simultaneously.
Little did I know that I was in for another complete surprise. After each of them had another orgasm, they lay beside each other, caressing each other softly while they talked and lightly kissed. Jan stood up and walked towards the house, leaving my naked wife on her back, her legs spread, her finger circling her engorged clit. Jan returned a minute later with a beautiful large dog. I’m not sure what breed it was, but it was big.
As I watched, Jan got down beside my wife again, leading the dog over to the two of them. Without hesitating, Jan ran her hand over my wife’s breasts and squeezed her nipple, making it protrude. She then pulled the dog closer, and it leaned down and licked at my wife’s hardened nipple. Its long tongue wrapped around my wife’s breast, and the dog licked and licked while Jan kissed my wife.
Jan’s hand slipped between my wife’s open thighs, and she sank a finger, then two, inside my wife’s soaking cunt. The dog had moved down a little and was licking my wife’s stomach and upper thigh as Jan continued to finger fuck my wife. She then removed her hand and let the dog move down so he was licking my wife’s cunt with his raspy tongue. This drove my wife wild as she wreathed under the pleasure the dog gave her with his long tongue.
She raised her hips a little, and I could see the dog’s tongue running the crack from behind her asshole right up and over her swollen clit. Jan had found the dog’s cock and was pumping it. It was amazing the length of the dog’s cock, and it seemed to be getting longer and thicker the more Jan rubbed it.
After a few more minutes, Jan got up and returned to the house with a large towel rolled up. She leaned down and stuck the towel under my wife’s hips, raising them. She then pulled the dog so he was standing over my wife, his long cock pointed right at her open cunt. Jan moved him a few paces forward, and his cock made contact with my wife’s cunt.
His long hard cock slid into her easily, and he started to thrust in and out of her while Jan held my wife’s legs apart and up in the air, giving the dog complete access to her cunt. After a few more thrusts, the dog’s long cock slipped out of her. He found her other hole in his wild thrusts to get back into her. His cock disappeared into my wife’s asshole, and he started his wild thrusting again. Only this time in her back end, which she had never had fucked before. At least, to my knowledge.
My wife groaned every time the dog thrust his long cock into her, and she was thrashing around on the ground. Jan was having a hard time controlling her as the dog fucked her. God, what a sight. My wife was on her back, her hips raised off the ground. Jan held her legs up in the air, and a large dog fucked the hell out of my wife.
I heard my wife ask Jan to stop the dog as she couldn’t take any more of his fucking. Jan stopped the dog and pulled him away from my wife. She turned her head and watched Jan get on her hands and knees with the dog behind her. The dog took one step forward, and his cock was buried deep inside Jan’s cunt. He fucked her harder than my wife. Jan was being moved around on the grass every time he thrust into her cunt. Her moans and groans were loud and getting louder as the dog continued fucking her with wild thrusts.
Finally, he finished, and Jan pulled away before he could knot her. She rolled over, and no sooner had she come to rest on her back when my wife was between her legs, lapping at her soaked cunt. I watched until my wife had finished cleaning Jan’s cunt, and I stood up, my hard cock making it hard to walk, and I left to go back to the races.
When my wife came home, she seemed different. She was more open, and whenever we went anywhere, she never wore panties and ensured her cunt was bare and shaved. She would sit with her legs apart and flash others, mostly though she would flash women who seemed more than interested in her. Several times when we were together, another woman would come over and converse with my wife. All the time, watching her open her legs more and more, exposing her bare cunt to them.
I was amazed at the number of women who seemed interested in my wife’s bare cunt. Her weekends were full of women sucking her cunt and fucking her with one of the many dildos she had purchased. The women came in all sizes and shapes, but one thing they had in common was my wife’s cunt, which they loved. I can’t remember how many tongues and fingers have been inside her since last year’s races. I’ve even seen her with two or three women working on her body simultaneously, one between her legs, another sucking her breasts. At the same time, another has her cunt over my wife’s face getting tongue fucked.
We also have two large dogs of our own. My wife went down to the pound and, after some testing, came home with a pair of dogs with big cocks. The two dogs follow her around, their noses buried between her legs and in her crack, their long tongues wetting her cunt before they fuck her. She loves to have one of them fuck her cunt while she sucks the other’s cock.
The most amazing thing she has ever done was when she had Jan over one day. She had Jan get down on her back with a large dildo strapped to her waist. She then sat down on the dildo and let Jan fuck her for a few minutes. Jan then called one of the dogs over and had him stand behind her. She guided his long hard cock toward her asshole, and soon, she was getting fucked in two holes at the same time by Jan and our dog.
Yes, my prudish wife has changed. For the better? I don’t know, but it has made life more interesting. And me? Oh yeah, I get to fuck her and Jan occasionally. I even have had a go with one of the dogs. When he was fucking me, I found out what my wife enjoyed so much.
*****
Surprised Again…
Well, here we go again, I thought as I watched my wife let one of our dogs fuck her. She was on her hands and knees. The dog thrust his long, thick cock in and out of her wildly. She grunted every time the dog thrust up into her, and I could tell from her face that she was in a zone all to herself.
This was a daily occurrence around our house now. Since the races last year, my wife has turned into a sex machine. She’s flashing her bare shaved cunt at women she didn’t even know and ending up with their tongues inside her or their soaking cunts hovering above her face. Her appetite seemed endless.
One day, she came to me and told me she had bought some tickets to a concert. She wanted to know if I wanted to go and I agreed, not knowing what or who would be at the concert. The night of the show, she dressed in the most provocative outfit she had ever worn. Her skirt was so short she might as well not have had it on as her bare pussy and ass was visible. Her top was see-through, and her nipples were hard and protruding. She was quite a sight; seeing her like that, I assumed something was up and I would enjoy the evening very much.
When we arrived, I saw this was an African dance group, an all-woman African dance group. Of course, my wife had ensured we had front-row seats so the stage was inches from us when we sat down and gave us a good view. As the lights dimmed, my wife opened her legs a little, just enough to give the performers a peek at her bare cunt. It took a while, but eventually, most of the dancers had seen her cunt, and I could tell they were very interested in seeing more.
As the dancing continued, my wife’s legs drew further apart, and now her short skirt had ridden up her thighs so that her whole cunt and ass were visible to the dancers. Several of them almost stopped when they saw her cunt so exposed, but they tried to keep their minds on what they were doing, although it was obvious they were being distracted. At the end of the first act, several dancers smiled at my wife as they left the stage, talking amongst themselves and looking back over their shoulders at my wife.
When the lights lowered again for the second act, the dancers came on stage in new costumes, or should I say, in what was supposed to be costumes. They only wore a small g-string around their waists and nothing on top. Their breasts swayed and bounced as they danced while my wife watched each of them intently. I looked at my wife and saw that she had a finger deep inside her soaking cunt. My wife was finger fucking herself as she watched the gyrating, almost naked dancers just above her head.
I heard her moan when one of them exposed her cunt as she danced past. It was subtle, but I saw it as well as, I’m sure, most of the audience did too. This happened repeatedly. As more of the dancers exposed themselves to my wife until it became just a blur of naked flesh, writhing and gyrating on the stage, putting on a special show for my wife.
By the end of the performance, the dancers had shed their little strings and were naked. My wife didn’t know where to look first. They all were smiling at her and exposing themselves to her. This was her night, and I knew I would be surprised again by her actions. When they came out for a curtain call, several women in the audience threw their panties onto the stage.
Some of the dancers picked them up and smelled them before turning to face the audience with big grins on their faces. Two of the dancers beckoned to my wife to meet them backstage as they walked off the stage, their bare cheeks bouncing with their gait. My wife looked at me, and I nodded, sending her off to what I knew would be a fun-filled night for her. I wasn’t worried too much, but I did want to be nearby so that nothing would happen to her.
By the time I got backstage and found my wife, she was naked. The two dancers, who had beckoned for her to come backstage, were with her. Or should I say on her? One of them was furiously sucking on my wife’s breast while the other was behind her, spreading her cheeks apart and tonguing her asshole. My wife had her arms at her side, and her head was thrown back as the two black women continued feasting on her body.
I could see the pink insides of the black woman’s mouth, sucking her breasts as her tongue swirled around extended hard nipples. Her hand has crossed my wife’s legs to circle her clit. My wife repeatedly moaned as she came in one of her many-to-be orgasms. The woman behind her was tonguing her ass, and I could see her tongue slip inside my wife’s hole. She started to tongue fuck her asshole.
This was one of the most erotic sights I could have ever imagined. Seeing my once prudish wife sandwiched between two very black, big-breasted women getting fucked and sucked. It wasn’t long before other dancers appeared and joined the group activities surrounding my naked wife. One of them has a huge strap-on dildo around her waist. As she walked up to the group, it swayed and bobbed in front of her.
She walked right up and found a willing cunt to thrust it into, and while now four women surrounded my wife, she started to fuck another dancer just inches from the group. Another dancer appeared with a strap-on dildo tied around her waist. When she came up to the group, they, for some reason, parted and let her have complete and sole access to my wife. She pulled my wife’s head down and stuck the dildo into her mouth, thrusting slightly as my wife tried now to gag on the lengthy phallus.
After a minute, she pulled my wife off the dildo and turned her around. She told my wife to get down on the floor. My wife did as she was told, and with her on her hands and knees, the woman thrust the dildo hard into my wife’s cunt and started to fuck her wildly. Some other dancers just stood and watched my wife getting fucked while others were kissing and caressing each other with abandon.
I happened to look around and saw another amazing sight. Several other women from the audience had come backstage and were being used by the dancers, much like my wife. One woman was bent over a chair while a dancer fucked her hard with a strap-on. Another was sitting on a stool, having her cunt sucked while she held the dancer’s head against her. Yet another was on her back on the floor, her legs over the shoulders of another dancer who was fucking her with a strap-on. At the same time, she tongued and sucked a soaking wet black cunt that was lowered over her face.
The moans and groans were getting louder and louder and more frequent as the writhing mass of white and black flesh fucked and sucked each other. I looked again where my wife was and found she now had two dildos inside her, one in her cunt and one in her asshole, fucking her simultaneously. Another dancer stood at her head, holding her cunt lips apart so my wife could lick and suck her cunt and clit. They were all moaning loudly as I watched my wife in a position I would see her in repeatedly that night.
When we finally got home, my exhausted wife went straight to bed and fell asleep quickly. I sat downstairs with a drink savoring the night I had just had. I remembered what it was like to see my wife being fucked by two women simultaneously and what the other audience members did to her too. She had several of the audience members fuck her with strap on’s while she sucked quite a few clits, both black and white.
All told, I think my wife was fucked by the entire dancer group at least once, while the audience members fucked her a few more times after that too. For someone who didn’t, until a year ago, want anything to do with women’s sex, she has sure changed.
While I was sitting, trying to relax and remember the evening, my cock was hard. After finishing my drink, I softly whistled for the dogs to come in, and when they did, I quickly shed my clothes and got down on my hands and knees, turning my head back to look at them. It didn’t take them long to figure out what I was up to, and I soon found myself stuffed full of a hard, thick dog cock. While the dog fucked me, I pulled the other one around before me and stroked his hardening cock. When it was hard, and he was whining a little, I pulled him to suck his cock, while the other dog pounded in and out of my asshole.
I waited until the dog fucking me came, then I rolled away from him and moved to the other dog, giving him a chance to fuck me too. He didn’t need any incentive as he was on me and in me in a flash. He fucked me harder than the first dog, and again, when he came, I rolled away from him so he couldn’t knot me. Now I felt better and somewhat fulfilled as much as I knew my wife was. It left me wondering what other surprises my wife would encounter. I was looking forward to whatever it was.
*****
Surprised Once More…
I didn’t recognize the ass of the woman sitting on my wife’s face and grinding her cunt up and down so my wife could tongue her entire crack from asshole to clit. Her hands kneaded her breasts, and she moaned loudly as our neighbor licked and sucked at my wife’s cunt simultaneously. I have seen many women come and go and a lot of breasts and cunts but this one I was sure I had never seen before.
I watched the three women for a time, then wandered off. When I returned, my wife was on top of the woman she had been sucking, fucking her with long thrusts of a huge dildo strapped around her waist. The woman had her legs over my wife’s shoulders and was yelping whenever my wife thrust into her soaking cunt.
It then dawned upon me who she was. She was the school librarian that my wife had told me about. When she went to the school to pick up our son the other day, she ran into this woman. The woman had asked her to come to her office in the library and had closed the door, which was uncommon. She then questioned my wife about the rumor she had heard about her.
My wife sat very primly for a minute, then opened her legs a little, giving the librarian a peek at her bare cunt. That took the wind out of the woman who couldn’t help but stare at my wife’s bare cunt. She got quite flustered and finally stopped talking altogether, just sat and stared at my wife’s cunt.
My wife opened her legs a little further, and her short skirt hiked up her thighs until her cunt and asshole were visible to the woman. My wife then kicked her shoes off and squirmed in her seat just enough so that her skirt rode right up to her waist, exposing her entire crack and cunt. The woman stared momentarily, got up on shaky legs, and came around the desk.
She fell to her knees between my wife’s legs and leaned forward, sticking her tongue deep into my wife’s cunt. My wife momentarily held the woman’s head in place, then pulled her away. She then stood and took off her blouse and skirt. Laying on her back on the woman’s desk, she spread her legs wide and invited the woman to help herself, which she did.
If there had been anyone in the library at the time, they would have heard the two women moaning and groaning as the librarian ate my wife’s cunt. My wife raised her legs high in the air, and the librarian licked and sucked up and down her entire crack, concentrating on my wife’s wet cunt and puckered asshole. She then stuck two fingers into my wife’s ass and finger fucked her while she ate her cunt.
After about half an hour, the two women parted, smoothing their clothes a little before opening the door. So that’s how this woman ended up sitting on my wife’s face in our bed and having her cunt fucked hard by a strap-on dildo, a large one.
This was a surprise as the woman was known as being quite a prude and very standoffish, so to see her naked, kneading her breasts, and getting fucked was quite a surprise. It didn’t end there, either. Just as I thought she had had enough, my wife brought one of our dogs into the bedroom, and the woman was now on her hands and knees with a large dog cock buried in her cunt. She was howling as the dog pounded in and out of her. Once he slipped out, instead of finding her cunt again, he found her asshole and ground his cock harder as she yelped and howled even louder.
She was enjoying it as she pushed back against the dog’s thrusts. She leaned forward to rest more on her arms and pushed her ass higher. The dog responded by thrusting even faster and soon filled the wanton asshole of the woman with a hot, slippery dog come that oozed out of her cunt when he pulled out of her.
She didn’t have time to rest, though, as my wife quickly got behind her and, flipping her over onto her back, found her clit with her hot tongue and licked and lapped at the woman’s cunt with full abandon. The woman was completely spent when my wife finished tongue fucking her cunt and asked that she be able to rest for a minute.
My wife looked at me and nodded. I moved over to the woman who had her eyes closed. I moved between her legs and opened them, exposing her soaking wet cunt. I leaned forward, and my cock slid into her easily, which brought her to complete attention as I started to fuck her with long, slow thrusts. She looked up into my face and smiled before raising her legs on my back, giving me more access to her cunt.
My cock went into her deeper when she did that, and soon I lifted her legs completely over my shoulders and leaned back, thrusting my full 8 inches deep into her cunt. She was moaning a little, but now she openly told me to fuck her harder and deeper. I tried and felt something pushing against my asshole before I could move. I quickly looked around and found our neighbor wearing a strap-on, pushing the head of it against my asshole. I pushed back, and the fake cock slid into me fully.
As I fucked the librarian, my neighbor fucked me. We got into a rhythm, and soon the three of us were moaning and groaning loudly as we all came within seconds of each other. When I pulled out of the librarian, hot come came with me and started to pool under her cheeks. She didn’t care, just lowering her legs and rasping that she had had enough.
Several days later, she was back for another go-round. This time she got fucked by both dogs, which she seemed to enjoy immensely, more than getting fucked by my wife or me. She explained that she had often thought about having a dog fuck her but had never had the chance to try it until now. She said she was hooked and loved the feeling of the dog’s hot hard cocks pounding in and out of her cunt.
She proceeded to reach over and start to rub the dog’s cock again until it was hard. She lay down on her back and pulled the dog over her, raising her hips off the floor and wrapping her legs around the dog’s middle. She pulled the dog again slightly until his cock was pointed at her asshole. The dog took over from there, wildly thrusting until he found her hole, then exploded into her. She yelped as the dog started to wildly fuck her asshole with quick thrusts.
Before long, she was panting loudly as the dog continued to fuck her fast and hard until he started to whine, signaling he was coming, she quickly pushed him away from her, and he came all over her, spraying her arms, legs, chest and face with a hot sticky dog come. She lapped at it while pulling the other dog over to her. He soon was fucking her asshole, too, as she yelped and howled in pleasure. He came soon after, and she pushed him away just as he came. He sprayed her body with his hot come while she rubbed it into her chest and breasts, licking it off her face as best she could.
A few days later, when I came home, another new body was in our bed with my wife and neighbor. This time the woman was between my wife’s legs, lapping at her wet cunt while our neighbor was behind the woman, fucking her with a strap-on. The three of them breathed heavily as they fucked, and the room smelled of sex and cunt. I was overwhelmed and was soon beside my wife, watching her getting her cunt eaten by this woman.
It turned out to be the neighbor’s mother-in-law who came over for a visit and got more than that. My wife was over at the neighbor’s when her mother-in-law arrived, and the three of them soon went to my wife’s bed. My wife had given the woman a full view of her bare cunt, and the woman had responded immediately by caressing my wife‘s cunt and finger fucking her. They were soon in a jumble of bodies with the mother-in-law between my wife’s legs, lapping at her cunt, while our neighbor had her mother-in-law’s cheeks spread and was lapping at her asshole.
Now they were all naked on our bed, fucking and sucking for all they were worth. They soon changed positions, so my wife was on top of the neighbor while her mother-in-law was between her daughter-in-law’s legs, lapping at her cunt while my wife used a large dildo to fuck our neighbor. This was getting crazy almost every time I came home. There were different women in our bed, either fucking or getting fucked by my wife and others.
Weekends were hectic as my wife never wore any clothes for the entire time. She rarely got up as she was always. It seemed busy with another woman or women. One weekend, twenty women were in our house in different rooms, all fucking and sucking each other. Over the last year, I have seen so many cunts and assholes both bare and filled that it was unimaginable to even think about it.
Myself, I didn’t get to fuck many of the women but used the dogs to pleasure myself. Once in a while, I would get to fuck an asshole or soaking cunt while being fucked at the same time. The women seemed to enjoy seeing that and participating in that too. Now how could my wife surprise me again?
The End.
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