Lesson for Bratty Pet
By Mr mismatch.
He purchased a 23-year-old fuck slave from a secret society he was familiar with and named her ‘Luna.’ She was supposedly kidnapped three years ago and was put through rigorous training that melted her personality. Now, she would obey whatever command given to her by people who owned her. She had scars from her inhuman training. The sides of her butt cheeks had a stab wound-type scar. Reportedly, two rods were pierced at that spot, and she was electrocuted. This was one of many mental and physical torture she lived through to become a perfect fuck doll.
John, however, gave her a collar and a tag with her name. He expected her to be a perfect ‘fuck pet.’ She lived up to her heavy price tag. John used to fall asleep to her sucking his balls or giving a rimjob. He had stuck his old wrinkly penis in all her three holes. Luna proudly satisfied all his kinks. She even started to fall in love with him. John, in turn, spoiled her. No matter her skimpy attire or if she was kept nude, she had the privilege to wear her socks with no repercussions, making her feel humane.
Luna also used to throw tantrums when some house workers walked in on their fuck sessions, although she understood her place in this house was beneath them and never scolded them. She used to make faces when they behaved in a way she didn’t like. Several times, John punished her by letting the workers wipe her or have her lick their shoes or feet to establish the hierarchy. Luna was a brat in this lenient environment compared to her training facility. She developed this bratty character despite humiliating punishments.
Once, Luna completely scattered laundry clothes across the room and even shouted she hated him because the laundry guy had accidentally lost a pair of socks belonging to her. As punishment, she was paraded throughout the estate with nothing covering her body, not even her socks. The laundry guy dragged her leash with occasional whacks to her ass when she was stuffed. Once her shame parade concluded, she was made to drink the piss of the laundry guy.
A new rule was added: whenever she saw any worker, she would get into a puppy-begging position, sitting on her toes with legs spread and hands in puppy pose, greeting her superiors.
Life seemed to be going smoothly, with Luna sometimes getting punished for her bratty behavior despite multiple warnings. Nothing too serious, just normal stuff, but John was almost hitting his old age and could not fuck her properly, and he had issues with his hip. His body was falling apart, and John could not give proper attention to Luna, his beloved fuck pet. He cared for her, so he decided to buy a dog that would play with her and keep her company.
So he brought a Husky with more ‘wolves’ in its breed, making it bigger than a normal Husky. The day Luna was introduced to Maximilian (Max for short). It was evident both hated each other instead of seeing each other as playmates. Both saw each other as a rival for the master’s affection. John’s plan backfired, and the two never got on common ground. Max would always bark at Luna, and Luna used to shoo Max away by throwing things at him. Both were beaten and punished, but they learned nothing, so John moved them into the same kennel.
Luna and Max chose opposite corners to sleep and maintain distance. A Husky is an intelligent breed, so Max was properly trained and understood all the commands, but also, the dog was cunning. He would fake injury, pretending Luna hit him, which would make Luna a ‘bad girl’ in the eyes of the master, which angered Luna, and she hated him even more. Still, both used to put master ahead of their hatred. They didn’t quarrel in his presence, but John knew about their bickering.
So he introduced a new leash with two collars at two ends so that Luna and Max would be only one foot apart. What can you say? The old man was losing his mind as he grew old. Expectedly, the plan proved his worst as they both quarreled, and Max was about to bite Luna. So, she hit the dog so hard with a metal container that it broke Max’s front leg. Master was furious with both of them, especially with Luna. He told her punishment was pending, and both were kept separate.
A few days after Max’s leg was healed, Luna was brought into the master’s room, and she was laid on her stomach on a small table. They strapped her hands and legs to the table firmly. Master proclaimed that this was a rape stand, and from this day onwards, he does not own Luna. She started to sob as soon as she heard this day forward, she would be fuck toy of Max and will obey the dog. The sadness turned to revolt.
Master continued, “I bought Max so that he can give attention that I could not due to my health, but you never understood that and fought with him constantly. It shows how poor I was in training you. So I will give you to Max. He’ll fuck you and give you proper training to get rid of your bratty attitude.”
Max was brought into the room and was forcibly made to fuck the bitch that injured him. The Husky was reluctant to mount her but knew to respect the commands. The moment he was pointed toward Luna’s ass and was commanded to mount, he got on top of her and, with the help of workers, could find his mark. His animalistic pounding was nothing Luna had ever felt, and she started to moan loudly and orgasm multiple times before passing out as Max’s knott entered her vagina. Once they were ass to ass, she regained consciousness to the laughter of her master, who enjoyed the mating thoroughly and demanded that they would mate for his entertainment every day.
Luna didn’t sleep that day as she felt whatever humanity was left in her was pounded out by Max. The next day Luna was brought to the master’s room as Max waited for his bitch. Luna’s socks had a picture of Max printed on them. Her collar was replaced with another modern version where ‘Maximilian’s bitch’ was printed in front with no tag. She had a headband with Husky dog ears. It was as if she was Max’s property, which, in reality, she was.
She was commanded to present her ass to her master. She to Max and presented her as she lowered her head to the ground. This mating went smoothly without the need for the rape stand. Although Max and Luna hated it, they obliged for their master’s sake. Luna again passed out as Max shoved his knott and went ass to ass. He dragged her limp body as he went to his master to get a pat on his head.
From that day, Luna was lodged with Max, and she was to be with him no matter what and suck his dick whenever he mated and lap up whatever cum spilled on the floor.
Max disciplined her completely, and she obeyed her new master strictly.
On the day John passed away.
During the funeral, Max was fucking Luna as he howled about his master’s death.
*****
As we know, Max now owned Luna, and they were scheduled to mate in front of the master every day for his entertainment. Two days after Max claimed Luna as his fuck toy, Luna had lost her fight to be master’s favorite pet and was now demoted to being fuck meat for her rival. Luna was happy she at least entertained master, so he never resisted. On the second day, as usual, Luna was led into the master’s room with Max waiting with her ‘Max accessories’ on.
Instead of having her present, he commanded to give a blowjob to her rightful master. She walked up to Max on her hands and knees. She couldn’t face him as she felt humiliated looking at him. Luna bent down and started to lick the tip of his penis sheath, and once his penis protruded from it, she could suck it properly. After 2-4 minutes, she was asked to stop and handed a scroll to read.
Luna started to read aloud, “I, Luna, a fuck toy to my master Maximilian, swear to be loyal to him and be available for his use. I shall transition into a dog bitch whose sole purpose of living is to be pleasure fuck meat for my master. I shall take no dick of any humans in my ass or vagina till my last breath. I will only fuck other dogs if Max wishes to share me with his friends. My licks and kisses will be to my master’s asshole as I am now his property.”
Teary-eyed, Luna looked at Master John, who angrily scolded her that she no longer belonged to him and should kiss the ass of her true master to show she accepted her place in this house. Luna had no choice but to oblige as she closed her eyes and licked Max’s asshole, and a caretaker pressed her face into the dog’s ass.
John clapped and exclaimed he would make her give a rimjob to Max tomorrow just as she did to him. The mating went as usual, with Max mounting her and Luna cleaning the floor of his cum by licking it. She didn’t pass out this time. On the other hand, Max started to enjoy this as once he separated from her, he peed on her head, claiming Luna to be his property.
As usual, this mating ritual continued for the next three days. Luna would start by giving a rimjob to Max, licking his asshole clean and licking his balls, and end with Max pissing on her. To remove the dog stench, she would be bathed thoroughly every day before sessions to be fresh when she entered the master’s room and afterward moved into the kennel with Max.
Unlike every other day, Max didn’t leave his bitch ‘s side today once they were locked in. Instead, he spent time licking Luna thoroughly, showing he cared for her as the dog loved licking her. Max reached her asshole and started to insert his tongue into her filth hole. Luna felt weird being licked there, so she lowered her ass and sat so he couldn’t lick. Soon to be met with angry growls from Max, Luna knew better than to defend herself like she previously did by breaking his leg, so she was genuinely scared this time and submitted to his demand as she gave her asshole to him.
Max continued to lick and penetrate her for some time, finally mounting her and starting to poke his penis into her asshole. Unable to hit the target, he slightly bit around her neck without rupturing the skin on the neck. Luna knew she should do something to take his penis into her ass, so she widened her legs, peeled her asshole open with her hand, and directed his penis into her with another with her face now on the ground.
As soon as her tightness gripped his penis, Max took Luna to pound town, causing Luna to cry in pain as it worsened with his knott penetrating her. He took time to insert the big knott into her small asshole. Once his knott was locked, the dog started to dump his cum in her gut. He separated from her, with his knott popping out of her asshole as his dog cum leaked. Luna passed out from exhaustion with her ass in the air. Caretakers who came to refill their food bowls saw her gaping asshole and reported it to the master, who was delighted that Max had begun his training.
The next day, she was washed, and the caretakers rolled her hair into two pigtail buns. Her collar now had an ‘anus princess’ tag and old socks. She was given an enema confirming that Luna would be anally expanded today. As she entered, John congratulated her for learning her first lesson from Max and hoped many more tags would be added to her bitch collar, as she expected she was made to peel her asshole and have anal sex with the dog that replaced her.
Max fucked her anally twice that day in their kennel. Within one week, her rectum was destroyed, leaving it gaping 24/7. To prevent her from losing all the cum and shit, she was fitted with a tail plug made out of husky hair shed by Max. Max was also encouraged to take her anally despite the damage, which made her ache for something to penetrate her vagina. She tried to masturbate but was always prevented by growls from Max, showing his dismay.
Luna began to beg Max to fuck her vagina by rubbing her vagina on the ground or try humping him. She used to rub her vagina on the boots of caretakers, roughly looking at Max until her pussy turned red. This begging continued for two days earning her another tag, ‘humping cumdump.’ Max finally gave the begging Luna her reward by fucking her vagina after three days used only to use her vagina if he was impressed by her humping display.
To show how well Max is training Luna, Max orders Luna to hump John’s leg by pointing his paw at his master when Luna tries to open her vagina during their routine fuck show in the master’s room. John was happy Luna found someone to subdue her.
Max’s two sharp barks meant she should present her behind for mating. Pointing his paw means hump that object. If he sits and barks, Luna should go and suck his dick, earning her another tag, ‘good fuck toy.’ Max later taught Luna to lick his body clean and affectionate licks on his ass, nuts, and even mouth-to-mouth kisses. This went on as Max would have his tongue hanging from his mouth. Luna would nibble or lick his mouth and tongue, and another tag, ‘lick monster,’ was added.
She was also disciplined in the way she walked. Whenever Max used to pull her leash as he brought her to caretakers before their daily fuck show for her cleansing, Luna would walk on her hands and knees with her ankles lifted, pointing upwards as if it was her stack position. The tag ‘bitch walk’ was added.
One day, John arranged a sex party, and the main show was Luna and Max. Max would lead her into the middle as Luna would show her bitch walk with her ankles pointing upwards. She had her hair in pigtail buns with a black and white cover on the bun as if it were her doggy ears and a husky tail plug. She had a new collar with small bells all around. The leash was collected to her newly pierced clit.
Once in the middle, Max’s caretakers removed the clit ring, and Max pointed to a guest. Luna would hump their shoes. Guests would throw treats at Max so he could point to them, and Luna would go and hump them. This went on for several minutes, and by the end, Luna’s pussy was red due to her roughly rubbing it on their shoes. Max was sitting, and he barked once Luna ran to him and started to suck him after some time, satisfied with his bitch.
He got up and barked twice. Luna presented her ass, wiggling at him. Max tore away the tail plug and started the fuck session, rocking her body back and forth, causing the bells to jiggle as their fuck show went on and ending with Luna dumping the cum deposited in her ass into a bowl and eating it. Watching guests get on, their lust and party turned to its orgy phase as Max led his bitch into his kennel and fucked her pussy to the jingle of her collar bells.
As the days went by, Max seldom used to fuck her pussy even after desperate begging, and once he did, Luna would cry in Joy that her master finally rewarded her. Her desire to please Max grew daily, but she would abandon her bratty attitude, sometimes pissing herself in a kennel when Max wouldn’t let her lick him. Although Max used to have her lick it clean, she used to throw tantrums but would behave if Max paid attention.
The ‘Attention whore’ tag suited her behavior, with Max completing the set of six tags around her collar: anus princess, humping cumdump, lick monster, bitch walk, and good fuck toy. Luna had completely forgotten that she was a human. All she cared about was to have Max’s attention 24/7.
And one day, John passed away from natural causes. He had made sure Max and Luna would stay together as he donated them to a local sex museum for freaky people around the world. Luna and Max were the only live display, so he was sure the museum would take good care of them. The museum even employed caretakers from John.
John had two separate funerals first one was for his estranged wife, kids, and friends, which went the usual way. The second was scheduled in the evening when previous attendees would return to their houses. The second had all his BDSM community friends. Few volunteers would take up the steel rod inserts penis of John in their body and fulfill the taboo necrophiliac sex.
During the funeral, Max and Luna were also brought in to witness their master’s burial. Bratty Luna didn’t care about John at all, pestering Max so that he could pay attention to her. Caretakers and even Max were disgusted by her. It showed what kind of bitch she was. Luna completely ignored the dead master she used to pretend she loved once.
As they started to lower John, Max didn’t want John to go without any reaction from Luna, so he got her into position and started to fuck her vagina, granting her tears. She was crying out of ecstasy. Only caretakers and Max knew this. For the people present, it looked like a slave mourning her master.
For the next three days, Max didn’t pay attention to her at all, as he wanted her to suffer. On the fourth day, Max’s face fucked Luna with his knott, not completely penetrating. It caused Luna to gag and gasp for air. By the end, she was lying in a pool of cum with her hair and face messed up.
Caretakers recognized this new position and added ‘gag puppy’ and ‘fuck tears,’ referring to the vaginal sex that caused her to cry. Eventually, they were moved to a sex museum, kept in a glass kennel with a 24/7 surveillance camera live-streaming. Entry to view this kennel was reserved for VIP ticket holders. A field was right behind the kennel for their outdoor activities. Although Max would be taken even outside for his walks, Luna would be confined to the museum walls for her entire life.
Kennel led to another glass pod in the middle of the museum, which used to hold their daily sex show from 10 AM to noon. Max would lead Luna in her bitch walk and put on a show. Whenever Max didn’t face fuck her, Luna was ordered to lick the dicks of the audience from the glory hole set in the glass wall. She would lick the dick as her sucking rights were reserved for dogs only. She would be her usual ‘Max accessories’ with all the tags she has earned.
After a few years, Max would succumb to death for reasons unknown. Caretakers speculated he was upset with the death of his master, John. For one week, the fuck show was kept on hold as the museum scrambled to search for a replacement for Max, Luna was denied sex, and due to her strict training by Max, she didn’t masturbate. Finally, the museum found a human bitch fucking dog, a Doberman named Jupiter, to match her new fuck master.
Luna would now have a single braid with black lipstick and black eyelashes, and her tail plug was removed completely as she was given a laxative followed by an enema in the morning. Her new collar read, ‘Jupiter’s moon pie.’ All the discipline taught by Max was embodied in Luna, and whenever Jupiter led her to the stage, she would hold her bitch stack. The museum tried to work in a storyline suggesting Jupiter and Luna were long estranged lovers who were the reincarnation of a prince and princess who couldn’t be together. Despite being born into different species, they have united in this life.
They even have a winter event where they marry Luna to Jupiter. They would set up an altar in the museum and have Jupiter enter with a golden body chain with a golden collar representing the sun. Luna would enter with a pearl body chain stuck to her body using piercings in her nipples, belly ring, and clit, representing the moon. She would be bathed in cum donated by the fans and have Luna read out wedding vows promising to be a loyal fuck toy concluding by having Jupiter first fuck her ass and then her vagina.
The name tags earned by her training from Max now adorned her body as rib tattoos. The Doberman was not as intelligent as Husky Max, but he was a dominant rigorous fucker making sure Luna would sleep exhausted every at his feet.
*****
Luna had turned into a money-churning attraction. To keep the show in demand, the caretakers brought in more company for Luna to be fucked by, a rottweiler called Thor and a mastiff called Zeus. Before the show, it would be auctioned who should fuck Luna, and the audience had to bid, and the highest bid would be heard, and that dog would be brought along. The most impressive part was the appearance Luna would change according to the dog she spread her legs for. As usual for Jupiter, she would appear with a single braid, dark lipstick, and a slightly oiled body.
For Thor, she would appear with her hair in a bun, an oiled body, and a gold necklace. For Zeus, she would appear with her hair open and free, a tail plug made from the fur of Zeus. Since the dog was furry, they wouldn’t oil her body; her arms and thighs were adorned with pearl bands. Hence Luna was shared between three thunder gods, and those gods competed to show who was the best fucked to the audience. Although she would be made to all three every day, dogs were extremely happy performing in front of a crowd.
Posters of three dog gods and their celestial nymphs decorated the halls of museums. During weekends they upgraded the fuck show to a four-way gang bang since all three dogs were highly trained. During gang first dog would fuck her vagina and would go ass to ass. Once the knot entered Luna’s vagina, the other two dogs spit-roasted her by penetrating her mouth and anus. Luna would have a steady diet, although 1/9 of her intake was dog cum that she used to lap up after her fuck sessions and would go under workout for few times a day.
The hierarchy behind the curtain was set. Zeus assumes the alpha male spot, symbolic of his dominance. Only Zeus used to piss inside Luna. He used to use her as a toilet by barking twice at her Luna knew it was time to serve her master as the toilet that she is, so she spread her asshole for Zeus to fill. Once done, she was tasked with holding it inside until he paraded his piss in front of the other two dogs and got their approval in the form of face licks and dumping the piss in the toilet. This task helped to keep Luna’s ass muscle tight, which recovered from the damage it used to sustain from anal fucking.
Zeus was almost like a second coming of Maximilian. He kept her bratty behavior in check and thought her new tricks, Thor and Jupiter, were not interested in playing with their fucktoy. Zeus had trained her to do several things. During their nap time, Luna would have to take Zeus’s face on her lap and sing his lullaby titled ‘cum drop,’ in which she sings how his cum drop liberated her and how while getting fucked by Zeus, everything turns dark except the warm cum that’s being filled inside her. She had to beg him to penetrate her pussy by humping and kissing the assholes of all three dogs to show her love.
Her winter wedding ceremony was replaced with a celestial fucking ceremony where all three dogs would be decorated with gold body chains and big gold collars. Meanwhile, Luna was made free of her collar, signifying that her training was complete. Her nose would have a septum ring with three small danglings that ended just above her lips, her two nostrils were pierced, and a thin chain linked tightly above her nose. She had a concha piercing with opal and her lobs with traditional earrings, which also had a few columns of dangling extensions, a type of white turban covering her hair.
Two piercings were made at the end of titles she had tattooed over her ribs and were overlapped by thin golden chains linking the two piercings. Her nipples, belly button, and clit all had a piercing with danglings. Colorful temporary body paint was applied to her arms and legs, depicting ancient design patterns and symbols. A winning bidder’s name was painted above her ass in big, bold letters. One by one, the three dogs would line up and fuck/romance their thunder nymph on stage.
Once her fuck session concludes, she would be given to the bid winner whose name she wears. They can take her anywhere within the museum campus and do anything to her. Luna’s task is to keep the cum of her dog masters inside till the end of the day. Usually, she would be taken to the cafeteria and ordered to give blowjobs from under the table as they eat or get whipped, have her hump their shoes until her vagina turns red, etc.
Everyone wanted a piece of thunder nymph, so the museum unveiled a new event where anyone could rent Luna for a very high price and have their dog fuck her. This was by far the worst thing Luna felt as she was made to fuck random mutts, and even more humiliating was getting fucked by chihuahuas that needed a stool to reach her holes. Being a submissive bitch to these weak dogs embarrassed her, and once she returned to her masters, they would give her a golden shower to get rid of other dogs’ scents. Thankfully for Luna, this event was scheduled only once a week on Wednesday.
The huge success of Luna as an exhibit convinced the museum that she needed competition, so they invested in developing another human bitch a Latina picked up from Columbia. This civilian ran into the cartel on the wrong day. She was thoroughly trained by a dog fucking facility in Germany. She already knew she was to be a fuckmeat to dogs, nothing more, well versed in facilitating dog mounting and named Stella.
A new format of the fuck show involved betting on these two bitches who get more fucking from the three dogs. The winner would strip the loser of all of the cum gifted to her by lapping up cum from the loser’s ass and vagina. At first, there was bitter rivalry between Luna and Stella, where they brought in vigorous hip movements and dick-sucking skills to attract the masters to fuck them. Eventually, this rivalry, to everyone’s surprise, turns into a friendship where Luna takes Stella under her wings, teaching her bitch walk and the lullaby of Zeus, and keeps the rivalry only for the show.
Both found empathy for each other despite not talking to each other. This actually went against the plan of the caretakers, who wanted to instill some level of humiliation in these degraded bitches, so they plotted a new plan to instill humiliation using the dogs instead of bitches. A new set of dogs was brought in: a Great Dane named Pluto, a black Labrador named Loki, and a pit bull named Hades.
For a week, the old trio were banned from fucking the girls and were sidelined to watch the new trio fuck their bitches. The museum constructed a new bestiality wing, and the new trio was moved there along with Stella.
Two groups were kept apart for a month and had their show. Stella and Luna would meet from time to time when they were scheduled to clean, but the dogs were kept separate.
Once the new trio had time to establish their brand, the staff initiated the week-long revenue war. A display was set up in both camps, displaying the score in a bar chart under Luna and Stella labels, and it was left to the dogs to figure out that more meant they won.
On the weekend, the losing camp would give up their bitch to the rival camp. During the first week, Stella lost against the familiarity of Luna’s gang. On Sunday, both gangs were brought onto the stage. At this time, Stella and Luna had no idea about the new competition setup. The caretakers unveiled the chart depicting Luna as the winner. They brought Stella forward and tied the new trio of dogs to a nearby establishment a few feet away. The old trio was brought on stage to Stella. They were commanded to ravish their price-old trio, wanting to exact revenge for the previous cuckolding. They went for it as the new trio barked in anger throughout.
Stella was sobbing, knowing this was hurting her masters. Once done, she was led to the old trio camp for the day, where the old trio treated Stella worse than a fuck meat. Ignoring Luna completely, they pissed over Stella’s face and inside her leaving her in a mess of cum and piss at the end of the day. She was taken in the same state to the new trio for the night. The new trio led by Hades didn’t want to greet their bitch now reeking of piss from their rival camp. They wanted to clean the scent, so they gave their own piss shower Stella. Stella also swore in her heart not to lose next week.
Come the next week’s result, Stella lost, resulting in the back-to-back cuckoldry of the new trio. So, to bounce back, Stella wanted to do something that no one had ever seen.
During their show, Stella started to moan loudly, making faces, and once they went ass to ass, the big dog Pluto started to drag Stella around the stage. As they practiced, Stella would be acting as if she was limp from the fucking with her tongue out as she passed to overly enthusiastic Loki, who pounded Stella rapidly, breaking her moaning with every stroke and creating a weird horny sound. This degenerate bitch has the new trio a huge win over the old trio. This time, during the result announcement, Luna was given to the new trio, who exacted revenge by dragging Luna after mating and sending her covered in piss by nightfall.
This astonishing strategy worked wonders for the new trio. Stella would also not reveal her act to Luna as they won 4 times continuously. Luna was given a collar with three tags showing pictures of the new trio to signify this monumental win. Luna figured out that the new trio might have added something to their show to give this type of advantage, so she started thinking of ways to attract an audience. Still, she couldn’t come up with anything, and the win streak got extended to 6. Luna’s collar was attached with three cum filled capsules, always reminding the old trio dogs that they should send their bitch to the other camp come the weekend.
Luna was old school, so she thought spicing things up and tongue kissing she learned from Max, her former master. Luna’s show would start with her biting on the dangling tongue of her mate and converting it into a mouth-to-mouth kiss. Then she would go behind and give the dog a rimjob. As the dog starts to fuck her ass from all four positions, she shifts to a kneeling position with her arms behind her head, exposing her breast and having the other two dogs lick and hump her breasts.
After another anal, she would beg the last dog to fuck her vagina by rubbing her vagina on the carpet or humping things on stage. This act finally turned fruitful for the old trio as the humiliating collar was removed from Luna, and Stella was given to the gang to dump their frustration.
Now, a balance was struck where either couldn’t get a streak longer than two. Eventually, different methods were introduced to determine the winner apart from revenue. A direct “who cums first” match was used between two bitch with a long dildo attached to their ass. Luna’s experience gained top hand over Stella.
Stella and Luna served till they turned 50. Even though they were 50, both looked fit and didn’t let their age show. Museum moved on to new things, and these two were sold to a Sheik prince with a fetish of fucking goats and animals. Soon he was to be crowned, and this fetish would give him a bad image, so to cope with that, she was gifted these two bitches who were tasked with fucking both the prince and their family dogs.
The End?
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